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Reviewer: nml Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2018 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 8

This story was so great! I'm so glad you posted it here b/c I completely missed it on A03 (and also I don't read WIPs from authors I don't know anymore so truly glad you posted it in its entirety).

For new authors I usually read the ending first, b/c I can't deal w/unhappy and then sometimes I read backward to get a feel, I have to say your story really suprised me, from the last chapter I had no idea of the start and course of the story. I then read from the start and it's really so clever, interesting and new and very well written - kudos!

Thanks for writing and sharing!

Reviewer: urmeli2007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2018 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

I have reached the end of your story and regret that the time of the first reading and getting to know is already over. but after this first encounter many will follow and I will discover much more in your story. Because she is full, colorful and deep. I have read every story worth reading and some that were not worth it, but yours is one of the very rare and so big stories that you can read and rediscover again and again. Thank you

Author's Response:

Thank you! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2018 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

I thoroughly enjoyed this story.  At first, I bought into it b/c I was curious as to how you would bring Spock into the storyline.  The description of the Vulcan ship was creepy and made me uncomfortable, but I persisted b/c I knew that somewhere in there had to be our favorite Vulcan.  The way you peeled the facts back a little at a time made me more curious, and I stayed up until after 2 this morning before I made myself put this down and sleep.  The end, where they all come together, was pretty sweet, too.  Thanks!  

Author's Response:

Thank you! I tried my best to make it suspenseful, so I'm glad it worked out! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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