Date: 07/28/2018 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a loving story. Deep and captivating. I thank you for the wonderful time I had with your story,
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. It makes all the angst you go through trying to get the characters to speak and act in a way that seems true to them worth while.
Date: 06/23/2018 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a well thought out concept. I love the idea that Spock had to teach a point of stability before feeling safe enough to connect with him. Bones as good doctor and facilitator is well delineated characterisation. This was a really enjoyable tale.
Thank you for taking the time to comment. In my head, Spock always tries to consider the needs of others above his own - hence his guilt over Leila and need to protect the Captain. Glad you enjoyed Doctor McCoy. I sometimes feel folks forget that he is a kind and caring physcian. That there is something deeper than jokes and insults towards Spock