Date: 04/22/2018 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved the 'heat' and 'need' you created in Spock through the images in the story. It created a vivid picture. When Spock saw the footprints in the sand with the ocean sounds "no beach to walk on..." came toubling into my mind and I knew two lonely souls would soon take comfort in each other.
Thanks for commenting and for picking up on the "footprints in the sand" reference. I did want people to think of Kirk's wistful "no beach to walk on" line. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :-D