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Reviewer: LSPINGLES Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2018 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved the 'heat' and 'need' you created in Spock through the images in the story.  It created a vivid picture.  When Spock saw the footprints in the sand with the ocean sounds  "no beach to walk on..." came toubling into my mind and I knew two lonely souls would soon take comfort in each other.



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting and for picking up on the "footprints in the sand" reference. I did want people to think of Kirk's wistful "no beach to walk on" line.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  :-D

Reviewer: Gatetrekker Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2018 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Probably the best of the Pon Farr tropes. Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for commenting?  :-D

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