Date: 03/30/2018 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a fun story! I especially enjoyed the banter between Kirk and Spock, particularly this delightful exchange:
“The Enterprise is my home now, has been since the first day I set foot on her, but even the sight of my beautiful silver lady doesn’t give me an erection.”
“Not any more, perhaps.” Spock said with a twitch of his lips.
Kirk laughed. “You know me so well,” he said, nibbling Spock’s warm neck.
“Not as well as I intend to,” Spock answered in quiet, intense tones.
One minor quibble -- Kirk is from Iowa, and McCoy is from Georgia, so neither of them is likely to use the word "snogging," to describe kissing, which is only said by Americans if they've been reading a lot of British novels lately. :-)