Date: 08/02/2018 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
This made me think about TOS K/S and how sometimes two parties just need to be separate and grow into who they are before long term can work out. That for me is what makes this a good fic. It’s a serious issue dressed up as Kidfic. I love how you had Spock grow up and stop tuning away from feelings. I wonder if later you will tell of Jim’s journey to maturity.
Many thanks for the hours of toil that we’re put in to give us something to enjoy.
Date: 05/27/2018 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
I read this as one file, so I read it through with no breaks. This is just lovely. The relationship is very sweet, and their young love growing over time and distance was absolutely charming. It’s easy to see that as teens they would each have some insecurities, but they seem to be resolved for now. I love the happy and hopeful ending - it seems that they’re going to make it after all. :-)
Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful work!