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Reviewer: LSPINGLES Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2018 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am happy to see someone touch on that kiss.  Not that we haven't seen Jim kiss other women but in my mind that was before he was with Spock.  So this one bothered me more.  Thanks for letting our boys hash it out and put it behind them.

Reviewer: urmeli2007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2018 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a nice writing style, i could see the pictures of your story in color. Thank you

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