Date: 01/24/2018 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. The Admiral's first response was so typical, it was too uncomfortably real. I love that your Kirk decided to wear the uniform, then commanded that the rest of the crew also wear it. It just seems like something Chris Pine's Kirk would do - totally off the wall and unexpected... and absolutely effective. Starfleet command's try at designing the uniform was totally silly and, again, way too typical of bureaucracy to be comfortable, yet I laughed out loud. I love how you had Spock ultimately solve the problem by sicking the Vulcans on it. Perfect!
Date: 01/23/2018 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
I wasn't sure I'd like this when I saw the title, but I don't know when I've laughed as much from a fan fic as I did with this. Even in the 60s when Trek was on originally, I thought the women's dresses were sexist so I love to see a take on it from today's perspective. I assume that posting it on the weekend of the Women's March was not an accident either! I love some Girl Power, lol. Thanks!