Date: 04/05/2018 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
You are a great storyteller. Your stories draw me in and hold me. Great job and I'm highbrow more. You finished The finer things in one month...I'm going to need you to get moving with Lessons of Love. I'm feening for quicker updates!
Date: 02/20/2018 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 24: The Final Frontier
"But of all the things I experience, Jim, you...you are one of the finer things.”
I read this whole store for this one sentence [sigh] It's really one of the most romantic things ever. I would've always thought so, but esp from a mature viewpoint, it's one of the most wonderful things you could say to someone.
Also, a great place to get a title. In standardized tests "choose the best title" was my bane, but you read this and it's "AAAAh" :)
Date: 01/22/2018 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 14: Androids
The extensive sections of regurgitated TOS, they are becoming tedious. I begin to skim. It is disappointing to contemplate how much more regurgitation there will be when the story it had begun with so much originality. So much is now simply the same and, I hate to say, boring.
Date: 01/22/2018 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 14: Androids
Love can be so painful—sometimes you question whether it’s worth it. Two people who love each other deeply and failures to speak the truth of their feelings and misunderstandings have kept them apart. Perhaps, this would have been the result even if they had been honest with each other, but I’m eagerly waiting to see how they move forward.
Date: 01/21/2018 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 14: Androids
Classic Ivan style!
I do understand why you ended this the way you did. But...
I cannot deny I want MORE. Lots more! I love your version of the TOS episodes.
Maybe it's because TOS is my first love.
PS--I'm here on the Archive. Take a peek!