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Reviewer: Pookie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2018 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Just...wow! I really loved this story. Usually such short stories don't fulfil me, but I love this little moment. It does, however, make me wish for more, which I hate...but I know is the aim of every author! Great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I want more too, but after seeing how long this one chapter took me to write, I think the plot bunnies will have to hold their horses until I have more time on my hands. Glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: Ohalovaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2018 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this. I love the nuance. A beautiful moment between our boys.



Author's Response:

Thank you! The parallels between Jim and Amanda just sort of happened. I wondered if anyone would pick up on it. 

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2018 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Congratulations on your first story for the archive!  I am really impressed by what you have done here, especially in light of the fact that you are a newby.  I love what I call "little stories" - the kind of fic that shows an intimate moment, a period of down time, or any non-momentous period in the boys' lives.  You did this one beautifully.  Your story voice was clear and articulate, and the only thing I didn't like was that there wasn't more.  Congratulations!  Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! There are so many plot bunnies running around my head, but I figured a character study/vignette type thing would be a good place to start, and just let most of the action happen off-page. It's really nice to have specific feedback. :)

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2018 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Gosh, I enjoyed reading this story.  You did a wonderful job in writing this.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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