Date: 10/28/2017 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 2: Thoughts of Love & Sex
I personally think this is wonderful. Please don't let that reviewer get you down. Most of the comments I see from her are nothing but negative. Keep on writing spirk. You're doing great!
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Date: 10/27/2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 2: Thoughts of Love & Sex
I cannot imagine le Spock and le Jim to converse like a poorly written Wikipedia stub. This does not seem to me as convincing dialogue or in character.
You're welcoome to your opinion. I hope sharing it had the effect you desired.
Date: 10/26/2017 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
C'est saccharine soft porn. Terrible.
Thanks for nothing. I don't know why, apart from over-indulgent self-importance, people like this say the shitty things that get said. The comment, and the fact that people, including this person, believe it's perfectly okay to say it; is every bit as SHITTY as my writing is. I never profess to be a good writer. Why do people like WriterPam4 seem to believe that they're a born critic? Freedom of speech, my arse! This is just a way for flamers/bitches/trolls/bullies/bitter humans to make themselves feel better. If I was going to say something like this to someone; I'd at least make sure that I read MORE than one story, and, if I had, I'd have the intelligent fore-thought to tell them that I'd done so. Then, perhaps, I wouldn't make myself look so bad, and I might even be considered to have a valid point. This reviewer WriterPam4 might even have a point about my work. I'm not afraid to say it! BUT, my point is, that that is NOT the point!! Now, I'll probably just get counter accused of being the one who is the flamer, and told that I'm so obviously sucking on sour grapes!