Date: 10/15/2017 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Writing your art is so touching and beautiful. thank you for your work and the part of your imagination. I hope very much you write further. I personally love longer stories in which I can exchange so completely and exactly that I have found with you. Thanks and all the best!
Thank you so much for leaving me a comment. I do have another story idea so hoping it will come to fruition.
Date: 10/02/2017 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed the story. I believe that the character reactions and responses were spot on! An excellent first effort. I look to read more from you!
Thank you so much for taking the time to write a review and giving a first time writer a chance. I do hope I'll be able to contribute another story. I see you have offered to BETA stories in your profile. I may take you up on it. I was so hopelessly lost in editing as I have never done any creative writng before. Hopefully, my bad grammar and spelling didn't distract you too much.
Date: 10/01/2017 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
The way Spock is dealing with this is very much in character. I'm so glad that Jim didn't jump to conclusions and confront Spock with accusations of infidelity. Spock would have been destroyed. This is a powerful story. You are very talented and I look forward to reading more.
Date: 10/01/2017 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is my third attempt to make a comment on this fic so I hope it takes this time. First, it was good to meet you at KiScom. Congratulations on your first fic. You handled Spock's response to the rape realistically, and having Kirk confess to his infidelity was a surprising but effective technique for dealing with the situation. Good first effort. I hope to see more in the future.
Thank you so much for persevering to try and send me a comment. I really appreciate it. I am so glad I got to meet you as well at KiScon since I have enjoyed many of your stories. You have such a range. I am pleased that you found that Kirk's confession fit. I was hoping it wasn't too forced. I do hope to contribute again. I got an idea as a result of all the discussions at the convention!
Date: 10/01/2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Intense but a great read! Well-paced and I could easily hear the characters in my head. You wrote Spock especially well. I see this is your first fic; hoping to read more!
Thank you so much for reading a first time writer like me and taking the time to write. Glad you found the pacing OK. I was worried I was repeating myself a bit. Hopefully I will improve in the future.
Date: 09/30/2017 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm not sure if I should congratulate you or commiserate with you on your ability to write a thoroughly psychologically accurate account of a strong, intelligent, logical man dealing with this sort of rape. This was a sobering read that took me back to a very brave, now deceased friend.
Thank you so much for taking the time to write a review. It has made my day. As I mentioned this is the very first thing I had ever tried to write and I really struggled myself with how Spock would respond. I didn't want him to seem out of character.