Date: 10/04/2017 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
This I like very much. It is written very sensitively. It is full of small brushmarks, nuance and colour rather than slapped on with a paint roller. There is no heavy, calloused, or inexperienced, callowed hand here, but the hand of an able artist, I feel. In particular, I liked the acceptance of the Sarek of the relationship between the Spock and the Jim. I have always felt an inconsistency of character when it is written that the Sarek he does not understand the Spock's draw to a human mate. He has the Amanda; of course he understands the draw!
There is one thing I would change; I would have had the Jim engage in a fervent pressing of mouths with Spock to prove a point to the elder Spock, not the giggles and an explanation. I feel the look on the elder Spock and the younger Spock's faces would be incredible, no? It would make me laugh in a good and warm way.
Wow thank you so much for this wonderful review! I'm really glad you liked it! 😳😳
Date: 10/02/2017 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Please, can you tell me the meaning of this, "Sleeping with Spock could have been god tier." I do not understand.
oh hahah it's american (?) slang for when something is really amazing. like on parr with god.