Date: 09/29/2017 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice!! I liked this story very much! My only issue is simply some of the grammatical issues. But that is something a good beta can help you witgh. Great story! Great concept! And I really feel bad that Spock is stuck with the word "shit" on him. LOL!
thanks for reading! haha, yes sometimes i think spock is lik "i really have the word shit on my arm. like that's a really a thing."