Date: 09/21/2017 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 4: Into Darkness
Again with the "truly". Spock saying "truly"? Come on.
Didn't 'get' this Chapter. Left me blinking and saying, "Whut?" I thought we were in TOS world? WHUT?? Totally confused. It really didn't get the point across I'm afraid. It just left me going, WHUT??
Date: 09/21/2017 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Search for Spock (McCoy)
I mostly really like it! It's almost spot on for McCoy's authentic voice - but not quite - that's why I held back a star. McCoy's voice is a tricky one to get right but this was a really good stab at it. There were little bits i really loved, the "That was private" bit for instance. Really characterful. Not sure I can hear McCoy using the words "truly" and "merely" though.