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Reviewer: spock2U Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2017 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 4: Into Darkness

Again with the "truly". Spock saying "truly"? Come on. 

Didn't 'get' this Chapter. Left me blinking and saying, "Whut?" I thought we were in TOS world? WHUT?? Totally confused. It really didn't get the point across I'm afraid. It just left me going, WHUT??

Sorry!

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Date: 09/21/2017 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Search for Spock (Jim)

Good authentic Jim voice. Would have liked this to be longer?

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Date: 09/21/2017 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Search for Spock (McCoy)

I mostly really like it! It's almost spot on for McCoy's authentic voice - but not quite - that's why I held back a star. McCoy's voice is a tricky one to get right but this was a really good stab at it. There were little bits i really loved, the "That was private" bit for instance. Really characterful. Not sure I can hear McCoy using the words "truly" and "merely" though. 

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Date: 09/21/2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Search for Spock

This is very well written. This may be the best thing you've written. Characterisation and internal voices are spot-on. The 'feel' is right and yea, it's good :)

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