This was so wonderful to read.
Eee! The last part is so incredible.
I really adore your version on stb. I love how protective Jim is of Spock.
This is amazing.
I love how you handled the tracking device scene. :)
This is so good!
Oh wow, this is really getting good!
I love this chapter. Spock trying to shield Jim from the pain he's feeling and him now knowing that Jim wants him as is first officer. Great chapter.
I love that Jim is able to feel Spock. Usually it's Spock who's feels Jim so I really enjoy this.
Oh no, I hope Uhura will be okay. And poor Spock, that had to be painful.
I'm so happy that they are speaking.
I love how you dealt with the necklace scene. Great work!