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Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

Poor Jim!  This is wonderful.



Author's Response:

Many Thanks, as ever; you are very kind.

Reviewer: Ms Moxie09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2017 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved thi. Short but very effective emotionally 



Author's Response:

Many, MANY Thanks xxxx

Reviewer: KeBo Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2017 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

I can be mistaken, but I think the part "When I was on Tarsus IV I was lucky..." and following is in there twice. Is this a story plot I haven't understood or is it a mistake?

But it is a lovely insight into Jim's feelings. I think Star Trek I-III is a lot about Jims inner feelings. The first one maybe more than the other two.



Author's Response:

OK . I'll have a look & sort it. Thanks x

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