Date: 04/19/2017 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can be mistaken, but I think the part "When I was on Tarsus IV I was lucky..." and following is in there twice. Is this a story plot I haven't understood or is it a mistake?
But it is a lovely insight into Jim's feelings. I think Star Trek I-III is a lot about Jims inner feelings. The first one maybe more than the other two.
OK . I'll have a look & sort it. Thanks x