Date: 06/05/2017 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a great taste of something fantastic! I hope that you will revisit this and expand more on how mermaid!Jim became a specimen of the lab. Perhaps an abstract pov of him being caught, then Spock first laying eyes upon him so we can a bit more of an elaborate explanation why he can't get the merman out of his mind. I've seen a lot of fan art of a mermaid AU on tumblr lately which has sparked a small obsession and this is the first fic that I've found and I would love to read more!! If it's alright I'd like to share the link to your story on tumblr so others can read it and offer you more helpful suggestions since I'm not much of a writer but a reader and commenter lol.
Date: 04/16/2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please kick Carol's butt for even suggesting dissection. That is cruel and I would have hoped that the scientific method would have advanced past that by the time that Starfleet is established.