Reviews For The Awakening
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Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2017 12:12 AM Title: Two Worlds

Go Jim!  I'm rooting for you to put up a fight that puts Amanda to shame!



Author's Response:

Believe me, he won't take anything lying down :) He and Spock will be quite antagonistic to each other at the start.

Reviewer: urmeli2007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2017 7:57 PM Title: The Awakening

My wish?............ more, go on

Author's Response:

I promise I will :) I've done around 75% or so of the chapter so it'll be on soon. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2017 3:17 PM Title: The Awakening

Oh this should be awesome.  What'll happen that Jim comes in contact with Pock?



Author's Response:

Thank you! Well like it says in the challenge, Jim will be captured and lets just say it won't be love at first sight :) If you really want to see something, don't be afraid to ask.

Reviewer: macywinstar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2017 11:11 PM Title: The Awakening

The Vulcans as a war-like, predatory species.  I like it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I just wanted to set up the history behind the story in this chapter, but in the next one I'll bring Spock and Jim in and make them finally meet

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