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Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2017 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a very credible monologue of one who is trying to come to terms with the loss of a dear one. There is the pain and there is the struggle to go on in a world made poorer by the loss. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. I took a bunch of stuff from my own experience of dealing with my mum's passing. :) Thank you for the encouraging review. 

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for this bittersweet piece. It captures well the TOS AU Kirk difference

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was so sad!  I like how you wrote Kirk's voice here.  Great work!

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