Reviews For Awakenings
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Reviewer: urmeli2007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2017 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

I' am here, and so i will hope and waite.
All the Best for you from cologne and Thank for your works, makes my life better and so rich

Author's Response:

Thank you! It's always lovely to hear when my work touches a reader, and comments are always appreciated!

Reviewer: Vulcan Lover Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2017 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good ideas, and some nice paragraphs; cleverly written stuff.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I don't write short very often, so it's nice to know when it works.

Reviewer: urmeli2007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2017 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am so happy, you write a new story, i have missed you so much!
There is only one fault, so short....
So i must waiting and have the hope, there is a time you will be writing another of your wonderfull storys.
So thank

Author's Response:

I'm not usually one for short stories, but that was one of the conditions of the zine. And tt had been awhile since I'd written in K/S, except for the story in Kathy and Alayne's last zine. It was fun going back and, hopefully, it'll get my muse back on track. So glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: 4dogshome Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2017 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is one episode that's rarely written about; great story, thanks!



Author's Response:

And it's one of my favorites, so I had a good time filling in the back story. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Bedwench Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed that. It had a really unusual style with the narrative jumping forwards as Kirk reawakens, then the jump to the present. It',has enough detail from the episode but not too much. Very well done. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! It was something I'd never tried before but, rewatching the episode, it seemed to me that Kirk was unconscious an awfully lot of the time. Things just sort of clicked into place after that. Glad you enjoyed the story!

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