Date: 02/17/2017 2:38 AM Title: It Men
Hi Cate - I was SO THRILLED to see you back writing her, it really was a positive point in my day - thank you! I of course devoured it right away, but I haven't been able to comment for practically months :(
I hope all is well, that this was a good hiatus, and, selfishly, I hope you write more!
Date: 02/04/2017 3:42 AM Title: It Men
Although I found the title a bit confusing, there was absolutely nothing else in this little piece that did. Your prose is tight and descriptive. The images you create are stark and clear, and you create both a heartbreaking and warming realization in both the boys that they have missed the boat when it comes to one another. I have re-read this several times already b/c it is so well crafted. If this is your warm up piece, Cate, I am really looking forward to much, much more.
Date: 02/03/2017 1:16 PM Title: It Men
You have really found your ease with TOS. I find your characters spot on. And the situation between the two of them feels just like what we see on the screen, this deep connection, instinctive understanding,the kind of resonance of one in the other. Thanks for sharing. It's good to have you back.