Date: 02/03/2017 2:28 PM Title: Fallen angel
Poor Spock. When we see the episode we do see the concern in Spock's eyes. He doesn't understand how Jim is not speaking with him, and now he's flirting with this young woman. Spock has every right to know what the hell is going on.
Looking forward to more.
Side note: There are some numbers at the beginning of three lines, just to let you know to edit it.
r32;Spock was unable to keep surprise from his tone, "Benecia Colony is eight light years off our course".
r32;Kirk's rebuke was swift and unequivocal "If my memory needs refreshing, Mister Spock, I'll ask you for it. In the meantime, follow my orders".
Will do and thank you.
Date: 02/03/2017 1:41 PM Title: Curiouser and curiouser.
Jim was very cold towards Spock. He truly gives no explanation for his attitude. Jim does have a lot on his mind. He truly doesn't want to believe what Leighton is telling him. Spock is beyond concerned. Can't wait for the naughtiness. Loving this so far.
Date: 01/21/2017 9:39 AM Title: Fallen angel
I have enjoyed reading this so far and have to admit that this was an episode that I never saw as being partiularly slashy so kudos to you! Now when I see the episode the next time I will remember and have a whole new view of it lol. I'm looking forward to the conclusion. Thanks for posting.
It has some lovely Spock moments though And in the last 3rd actually there are a couple of slashy moments. I hope to post another bit tomorrow.
Date: 01/13/2017 7:35 AM Title: All too easy
Love the first chapter. Spock is so very possessive of Jim. I like the fact that Spock has accepted his feelings towards Jim, he isn't fighting it. What lies ahead won't be easy. Their relationship is secret, which could cause tension between them. Off to read chapter two. I've always loved how you write. Excellent work so far.
Oh bless you. This started out short and has got right out of hand. Going to be a couple of anxty chapters!