Date: 07/28/2016 7:58 PM Title: Brave
Yes, please add more. I don't think you can leave them there!
Thank you! I'll start thinking of a way to bring them back together I just didn't want to have the cliché moment of them being saved at the last moment.
Date: 07/20/2016 2:51 AM Title: Childhood Means Simplicity
It is never dorky to tell an author you enjoy their work. Since I don't get paid for what I do here, hearing that I am someone's favorite author his always delightful.
I really like this story. The only (hopefully) constructive criticism I would offer is that it seems a bit rushed. I know the temptation of getting a chapter posted, but you could explore far more deeply. How does Nyota feel about seeing her ex-boyfriend at age 8? This piece is obviously NuTrek but Amanda is alive. How did that happen? Who's running the ship while Jim and Spock are both little? There is much more that could be done and would add richness to the story if you chose.
Thank you for your help and I will definitely take it into account. Maybe making it take a while to get to the boys because they've fused the doors shut. Thank you!
Date: 07/19/2016 5:49 PM Title: Childhood's Dream
I like it, i like it so much!
The sun is shining and i smile the whole time.
Best wishes from cologne
Thank you so much! I like your review ahah. I hope you will enjoy the last chapter of it, best wishes from England.