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Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 23

I'm very happy to see this new chapter.  It's so wonderful and aww, the ending of this chapter was so sweet.

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2017 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 23

Awww!!!!!  Those last few lines were so sweet!!!



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Thanks, glad you enjoyed the read!

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2017 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 22

T'Palla is cute!  I look forward to seeing what you have in store for her and the boys.

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2017 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 21

It's sad that Spock had to give up something that belonged to his mother but yet it's beautiful that he did it to get the person who means everything to him back.

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 21

Indeed, Amanda would.  So where do the boys travels take them next?  How will they gua themselves and each other from pre-reformation Vulcan?

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2016 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 20

Good chapter.

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2016 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 20

Very hot!  I loved it! The bonding rocked!



Author's Response:

Thanks...I'm not the best at writing smut, but I am happy with tis chapter. Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

I think that female has no clue about Jim...



Author's Response:

Jim has been underestimated through the story, but he has a major role to play.

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2016 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 19

2 new chapters is such a treat!  Jim's not happy that Spock risked his life for him, but we all know that he would do the exact same thing.  :)



Author's Response:

Yes, he would. Hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh wow, just so amazing!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2016 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 18

Go Spock!  Jim I hope you enjoy the mate that you have now obtained for yourself!



Author's Response:

He definitely will...lol

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2016 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 17

I'm so happy to see this new chapter!



Author's Response:

Hope you continue to enjoy

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 17

God, I hope Spock can win....



Author's Response:

The story will end happily

Reviewer: Gatetrekker Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2016 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 11

Why is Chapter 11 numbered Ch. 14?

Correction: 'even with your faithful beast.'

Advice: Do not mix tenses - past tense in the same sentence  a  present tense. For example: 'The fierce look on the warrior's face remained'; 'The warrior's fierce look remains as he approaches.'

 



Author's Response:

I renumbered the chapters and tried to go back and correct the mixed tenses, please excuse my errors. I sometimes miss them when I proofread my own work. Hope you enjoy the story.

Reviewer: Gatetrekker Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2016 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loving this story but the errors make me wince. 'To err is human...' 



Author's Response:

I corrected the typo, thank you for pointing it out. I do not have a beta reader. Glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2016 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

I hope they find Jim too!



Author's Response:

They will be reunited soon.

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2016 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

This is thrilling!



Author's Response:

Thank you, the story is coming to its climax.

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2016 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Spock and poor Jim.  Please save them!



Author's Response:

There will be a happy ending, but there will be major angst in order to get to it.

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2016 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 11

This chapter is excellent.  It's filled with tension and worry for Kirk and this is making me eager for more.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, happy you enjoyed

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 11

Hopefully Spock finds Jim before he is in the throes of Pon Farr.

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