Date: 11/22/2016 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
Why is Chapter 11 numbered Ch. 14?
Correction: 'even with your faithful beast.'
Advice: Do not mix tenses - past tense in the same sentence a present tense. For example: 'The fierce look on the warrior's face remained'; 'The warrior's fierce look remains as he approaches.'
I renumbered the chapters and tried to go back and correct the mixed tenses, please excuse my errors. I sometimes miss them when I proofread my own work. Hope you enjoy the story.