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Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2016 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is so intense! 

Author's Response:

Really? Thank You!

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have always considered this to have been the situation before Bones aged too much Nd Saavik became the surrogate. I like your idea that  the solution was out of necessity Nd after they had had time to contemplate 

Author's Response:

Thank you... I just added a line to explain Spock's guilt a bit more...

Reviewer: macywinstar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2016 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love this story.  Would be interesting if there were a sequel where Jim is rescued from the Nexus and then he learns about what happened between Bones and Spock.  Talk about angst!

Author's Response:

I've just added a line to explain Spock's guilt a bit more... I have half pondered whether to write a sequel, but I couldn't do anything much more than mention the awkwardness and dilemmas already mentioned... Can't think of enough story, or how to bring about the scenes...

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