Date: 12/30/2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh, this was so lovely! Thank you so much for sharing this! I love the parallels you were able to draw between Kirk remembering the many secret codes and tricks they had for surviving on Tarsus with the struggle of the Jews to endure and survive their enemies. Wonderful.
Date: 12/29/2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing this!
Date: 12/27/2015 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was beautiful - I don't think there's a better word to describe it. You used every word to such lovely effect, and it was amazing to see how Spock and Kirk created amongst themselves a pocket of warmth and love and light amidst the intrusive presence of unwelcome attention and unwelcome memories. I think that between the two of them they managed to create some new, lasting memories, to hold against the chill of less happy times... :-) As I believe all loved ones help us do. The whole thing was intense and slow and wonderful. Thank you muchly for sharing! Happy holidays!