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Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2017 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 3

This is so wonderful.  :)

Reviewer: WriterPam4 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2017 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

"Because now it was my eyes that never left his face... probably because I couldn't make out whatever the medical screen were reading" Le bollocks. There is no logical veracity in that which you write. If that were the cause it would be the Bones' face his eyes scrutinised for information, not the Spock's. 

Je désespère. Mal. Tres mal.

Reviewer: WriterPam4 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

"Didn't he want to feel?" There, she is the evidence you do not understand a thing. The Kirk, he would never ask this as the answer she is obvious.

Reviewer: WriterPam4 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think you do not understand the Jim and Spock relationship at all.

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2015 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

I love it that Jim refuses to give up on Spock and their friendship.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was so wonderful.  I love to read more.

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