Date: 06/24/2015 8:05 PM Title: Love? Nah, Couldn't Be
Omg!!! I love your work!!! I read what's up on ff.net but I don't have an account there so I came here to comment on how beautiful this story is. It took me awhile to adjust to thevideogame setting but being a final fantasy fan, I felt like it was spirk meet my favorite video games. I love it! I also love how you write spock and protective jim is so awesome. Great job, I'm looking forward to the next update!
Date: 06/24/2015 6:30 AM Title: Prologue
I also like the part with Amanda and Sarek. In most storys Amanda is only the motherly typ.
And i hope of an update soon ;-)
I love that part too. I love Amanda and I like imagining what she could be since the AOS she died so quicky.
Date: 06/20/2015 6:19 PM Title: Anger and Misery: They Both Suck
Loving this so far, the boys are both being pretty dumb but it's completely in character for them ^_^
Can't wait for more!
the story goes til chapter 11 on fanfiction if you're interested.
Date: 04/23/2015 5:17 PM Title: Anger and Misery: They Both Suck
I really like your story.
But you're so cruel to let us with that cliffhanger !
Did Spock and Jim form an unconscious bond ? They'll be perfect together. I hope Spock will realize that he's the one who betrayed Jim, and not the opposite.
AaaaH. Pleaaaase, write the next chapter !
( and excuse me for my english, etc :) )
Date: 03/27/2015 4:00 AM Title: Tempemental Humans and Moody Vulcans
Absolutely loved it! Great chapter. I love how Spock incorporated the truth but presented it in a way that Jim would assume he was a human from a very restrictive culture.
Yeah, Spock's awesome alright. Thanks for reviewing. More awesomeness yet to come.
Date: 03/25/2015 8:58 PM Title: Tempemental Humans and Moody Vulcans
I love this story for its plot. What a great idea! I crave more chapters...meanwhile I'll read your other story :) thank you!
Have fun with Cardinal Rule. I think i nailed the characters pretty well with that one . . . I should really update that one.
Date: 03/24/2015 9:51 PM Title: Tempemental Humans and Moody Vulcans
So I read all chapters in one. ;-)
A great idea and well written.
I like it and wait for more.
I can imagine, that the problems will go on. ... But a first step is done. ;-)
Indeed, there is still a long road to go. I am so glad you like it, and thank you for the five star rating. ^.^
Date: 03/22/2015 6:00 AM Title: Battle Royale
Fortune favors the brave Spock and wouldn't it be... Logical to see your subjects up close in order to determine the rate of discrepancy between how humans present themselves in the virtual world versus how they are in real life?
Can't wait for more! How passed is Jim?
Luckily you only had to wait a day for an update. ^.^
Date: 03/21/2015 6:56 PM Title: Battle Royale
Ooh, yes, Kirk's (partially) figured it out! Wonderful scene with the Vulcans, too - that'll make people curious. I was wondering how other Vulcans were responding to his sudden game-absorption. (Although I can't imagine they would approve of the Battle Royale??) oh, dear
Very nice chapter :)
You know I didn't think about their reaction to the Battle Royale. . . maybe his mother deleted the footage from Vulcan or she cut the film reel at the end with him ontop of Jim. . . . yeah I don't know. Thanks for pointing that out.
Date: 03/18/2015 12:57 AM Title: Getting to Know You
Hmmm... Will Spock fall too much into his interest in Jim? How will Jim put the pieces together. I love the comment that Spick contemplates stealing Scotty's idea.
Well it wasn't really stealing though I'msure Spock would have loved to look over Scotty's notes and help figure it out as well. He's still a scientist despite his current project. He was just afraid that if he reported the changed parametes, someone would figure it out before Scotty taking the credit. Not that Vulcan's feel fear. Cough. AS for Spock and his interest in Jim? Yeah, he's already too far gone. He just does't know it yet.
Date: 03/17/2015 7:16 AM Title: Getting to Know You
Haha, I can't see McCoy getting into video games. Which would only make the whole thing better for Jim, of course. I love the progression of this, you can really see Spock struggling to wrap his mind around humans in general (and Jim trying to wrap his mind around Spock!) Great update
Why thank you for your continued support. ;)
I always look foward to your comments.
Date: 03/02/2015 2:43 AM Title: First Lesson
Great chapter! A very fitting tribute to Mr. Nimoy.
Can't wait to read more. So how does Jim find out Spock is actually an alien? What does Spock learn from Jim?
You'll have to keep reading to fing out. XP
Date: 02/25/2015 6:04 PM Title: Tiberius, Meet Spock
'case study', oh dear. I predict a gaming-obsession in Jim's future.Very interesting story.
What gaming obsession? I'm sure Jim won't start spending every second trying to be with a charming, smart, kind of strange, man he met online and develop some sort of crush on him. Hahahahahahahaha . . . ha . . . *cough*
Well we'll see what happens. Jim has a few issues, and I'm sure being a case study isn't going to make him feel better. Thanks for the review! :)