Reviews For Waking
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Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2015 5:15 PM Title: Waking

My english is not well enough to say what I want to say.
So I take the review from angelocustode, and take the same words I searched for:

"Oh for the beauty of your language! It's poetry in prose, it's a sweet melody, a flowing rhythm, it's the joyfilled wonder of knowing and being known, of souls intertwined and hearts that have found a haven and a home in each other. "

Author's Response:

Danke! Ich bin froh , dass Sie die Geschichte genießen ! Sie drückte ihre Gedanken immer so schöne Sprache !

As always, I hope my translation is readable!  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  -Cate

Reviewer: Vulcan Lover Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2015 12:47 PM Title: Waking

I stuck with this when I realised the first person narrative, and I'm glad I did. It's constructively written. Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  -Cate

Reviewer: nml Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2015 11:01 AM Title: Waking

This was the last thing I read last night - and it was a lovely way to end a hectic weekend. thank you!



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  I was staring at my computer trying to put my thoughts in order and I couldn't move beyond this scene in my head until it was on-screen (on paper).  :)  Another one of those that demanded to be written.  Perhaps these are the types of demons that must inhabit a writer's soul, only to be exorcised by their realization in the printed word.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  -Cate

Reviewer: angelocustode Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2015 6:43 AM Title: Waking

Oh for the beauty of your language! It's poetry in prose, it's a sweet melody, a flowing rhythm, it's the joyfilled wonder of knowing and being known, of souls intertwined and hearts that have found a haven and a home in each other. 



Author's Response:

Sera quoted your glorious review, and I shall probably print it out and carry it with me.  Write, my friend, write!  You have poetry in your soul!  -Cate

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2015 6:00 AM Title: Waking

Wow. Just beautiful. Thanks for this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!  :)  -Cate

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2015 5:02 AM Title: Waking

What a unique and wonderful "first time." 



Author's Response:

Yes!  I had wanted to convey depth of intimacy that had everything to do with the mind.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  -Cate

Reviewer: AshayaTReldai Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2015 4:14 AM Title: Waking

Oh Oh OH! Beautiful! Thank you.



Author's Response:

I love this review-it made me smile when I first read it and I'm smiling again now.  :)  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  -Cate

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