Date: 12/13/2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Delightful little piece, illustrating Spock's total dedication to his friend. I much loved the audio log and was just musing about the inconvenience of having a security camera in one's quarters when a flying piece of a golden shirt took care of the problem. :D
Date: 12/13/2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
I wouldn't change anything. This was wonderful. Couldn't have been easy to come up with all that technical jargon. You made it believable. Loved the ending.
Technical jargon was a pain in the butt, I admit :D Glad (and surprised!) you liked it, so thank you!