Date: 10/29/2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. It could have been so. ;-)
I especially always had the feeling that Jim saw right through the fact that Spock and Bones had seen his tape, because they really were laying it on thick. And Spock's a terrible liar. Not that that's a bad thing
Date: 10/29/2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great "after" story. It feels as though there could be more ... lots more.
You can write me a personal massage with your ideas if you want and I will what I can do. I just thought I could leave some of it to the imagination of the reader.