Date: 07/29/2014 10:48 PM Title: Of Androgens and Things
Lovely! So well written. A sequel?
Date: 07/29/2014 2:04 PM Title: Of Androgens and Things
Neat science fiction concept, the blue blobs that communicate by transferring chemical messages. I like the way you got right into the MPREG experience, without a lot of unecessary buildup. I do think that it should have been possible to figure out who the other parent was right away, through DNA analysis -- I saw that the artificial womb or whatever it is was interfering with the instruments, just not sure I can totally buy that. But hey, it's science fiction and I'm not complaining. It got us to a stage in the pregnancy in which Kirk has a baby bump and the baby is communicating telepathically, all of which is good!