Date: 11/24/2014 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yes, it's interesting to speculate about how the pair will face the challenges ahead in this universe. It's good to know that they got through high school successfully and that Gary got his just desserts, although I imagine that Gary must really have it in for them now. I was sorta looking forward to seeing how their "make out sessions" and experimentation progressed to more, but I have a dirty mind. Thanks for writing this!
Date: 10/25/2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm afraid the school board is going to fire the bus driver for letting this happen.
It's possible. But he did try to do something which is what counts. And he did get Spock to a doctor. At least he did something. And Jim told him to get out of their business, which if he'd said nothing Gary might have attacked him as well.
Date: 09/04/2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
first I'm going to say Wiona needs to work on her parenting skills. There is a boy you know is causing your son distress and you just let him force his way into your home and seek out your son? Where is the maternal instinct to protect Jim? My mother and I rarelyu sees eye to eye and often she doesn't understand me and my interest and often argue, but the moment she hears someones mistreated me she's up in arms ready to pulverize the offender. I feel bad for jim. And what the hell spock?! Did you just try to set up Jim with a rapist?! Poor poor jim.
yeah. i guess it's because i'm looking into other ppl's ideas and they just mesh themselves together. Besides, Spock doesn't know how bad it really is. And yeah, i did kind of set up winona to be somewhat of an ignoramous in this story. maybe she's been messed up because of george's death or something. Things will get better though and there will be a "Spock-beats-the-shit-out-of-Gary" moment.