Date: 08/11/2016 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 20: Bring Bail Money and I Hope the Coffee Has Scotch in It.
I adore this story so much and I have to say that I love Kirk's speech so much. He certainly isn't pulling any punches, and I also love that he talks about the importance of having people you trust. Some suggestions for the baby girl's name: Lucy, Olivia, Lana, or maybe Amanda after Spock's mother. Last names are a little harder, but here goes: Austen, Luther, Harker. Last names are a lot tougher to come up with!
Date: 03/10/2016 4:14 AM Title: Fun with the future in-laws
Awww, Spock has mixed feelings about his father being interested in another woman, or rather he's in denial. Looking forward to seeing how he will end up dealing with that. Also, I love the idea of Jim stress baking. It seems to be such a Kirk thing to do. :) Great chapter!
Date: 02/06/2016 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 16: How to Juggle Your Work and Home Life for Beginners
Awesome chapter! Of course Spock isn't going to be thrilled with Carol being on board and I wonder how he will deal with that. Also, love how Kirk is handling the inquiry of how he, Spock, and Nyota will deal with being in a relationship and being aboard a star ship. I enjoyed reading this as always.
Date: 11/27/2015 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 15: Fun with Doctors
I really do like that Spock is guarding the lobby so that Uhura can't flee from her therapy session. I'm really enjoying seeing the interworkings of this relationship and the fact that they know each other all so well. Great work as always!
Date: 10/29/2015 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 14: How to Work Through Your Daddy Issues
You do such an amazing job with these entwining relationships and I just love it. I'm sorry to hear about your mother and I hope that she's doing much better now. The delay of the Jim/Spock winter series is perfectly understandable and I eagerly await to when you'll be able to post it. Keep up with the wonderful work.
Date: 06/27/2015 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 11: Love Wins
Such a lovely chapter. You always do such an amazing job with your fics and I always look forward to reading more. I'm so happy to hear about your recovery and I have to say that you're such a strong person. :)
Date: 05/31/2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 10: Saturdays Are for Family (The Definition of That Is Complicated)
Excellent chapter! I love that all three went shopping at the market and Jim's fretting over the perfect tomato. I think the way you're handling a threesome is incredibly well done.
Date: 03/09/2015 3:29 AM Title: Part eight: Mothers
Aww, I think the part with Nhi talking about not taking Pike's call was really sad. Uhura is quite angry and I can't blame her (even though they all had the best intentions when they did the intervention), especially since she doesn't seem that ready to deal with the situation.
Date: 02/22/2015 7:00 PM Title: Winona Kirk
Oops sent last review before I finished - as far as all the warnings on this story goes I just hope it gets to that soon cz it is not as exciting as I had hoped.
If you're reading this just for sex this story is in probably never going to satisfy you, because that's not the point of this story. Actually, I started the story with this warning: "Yes, there’s going to be sex in this but nothing really graphic right now. However, this story is not porn without plot. It’s probably going to be like 98% plot. There was a slightly graphic sex scene in this chapter but I cut it because I didn't like it and it wasn't necessary for plot reasons. In other words plot comes first."
Yes, there are some erotic elements, which is why I included that tag. But that's only going to be a small portion of the story, especially if it manages to keep its T rating throughout. This is a story about relationships, not about sex. Actually I don't write a lot of graphic sex since. There was some stuff in the second story in this series but it's not my favorite thing to write.
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