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Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

So how does Spock plan to increase Jim's stamina?  I like devious Spock.. Will you be writing more in this story line?

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2015 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

better. Much, much better.

Reviewer: Blthug Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2014 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

the original was fun to read but I liked your re write. The longer lenght has more details and rounds out the story better :) thanks for sharing! 

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am really curious to know what Kirk thought about all of this! He seemed to be enjoying himself, at least eventually, but what was on his mind? Thanks for posting the rewrite.

Reviewer: Hopecohen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved the original story.  Love the update. I will admit to being curious as to what happens next in this universe.

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