Date: 10/17/2014 7:46 PM Title: Epilogue: Crusader
Well, that was un expected! I was hoping that K&S would get together before this story was over, but if this chapter is bsically a set-up for the next story in the series, that's fine with me!
Kirk and Spock don't become a true couple until the middle of Junior. But I promise they will be together. You'll see how I'm planning to set it up once I'm writing Junior. Then theyll be a couple the whole time for Senior.
Date: 07/20/2014 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 8: Easter's Horror
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!! Just let Spock be able to take out Khan and his people before he hurts anyone else. Oh love the story so far and I see that you have both Christine and Jim in love with Spock and he with them but maybe it is just me but I just like the idea of Spock and Christine becoming just friends and Jim and Spock bond together.
That was supposed to be the final plan. It's just that I didn't want to see Christine in the lurch for once because I've always liked her and I am not a fan of Spock/Uhura. IDK, maybe it's me. I apologize if my opinion differs from yours btw I don't want to be disrespectful but I've always liked Chapel and I find that at least a temporary relationship with Spock should be a way to repay her.But the final plan is always K/S for me.
Date: 05/31/2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Beginning of a Rescue
This chapter certainly moves the plot forward. Wondering why Khan's minions captrued Christine but not Spock. Maybe they couldn't hypo him just as easily? Nice to see a competent and assertive Christine.
Date: 05/25/2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 3: Christine's Return
"TELL THE OTHERS THAT SOPHOMORE IS OUT IF YOU KNOW ANYONE. It's not realy running as well as Freshman, and i wonder if it's because no-one has found it yet. :/"
I think you must give a note that this story is a sequel to Freshman.
Date: 05/23/2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 2: Getting to Know You
I agree that this story is stronger than the first. How does Kirk know about Kolinahr, and what's the basis for his statement that he knows it doesn't work? Perhaps just gut-level insight?
Kirk knows about Kolinahr because Spock told him that that was where he'd been over the summer when he returned. He has also learned about it in school, but there's more action and plot on other issues. Sorry if that was a bit vague :/