Date: 05/03/2014 11:07 PM Title: Month 5
I love this baby already. I want to be her godmother. (Along with about 6000 other fans who are eagerly awaiting her birth in this site alone.) I love the immediacy, the "presentness" of your writing. It's not just that you write in the present tense, although that's part of it. It's that you are so -- there. Keep up the great work.
Date: 05/03/2014 4:33 PM Title: Month 4
Wow, you left us with a cliff-hanger! I'm eager for more. It is fascianting that Spock has finally acknowledged to himself that he loves Kirk, but his ambivalence and lack of experience with emotions is still tripping the two of them up ... hope you post more soon.
Date: 05/03/2014 4:29 PM Title: Month 3
This story follows such a unique dynamic -- two people expecting a child together when they are barely friends and do not know each other very well, but are drawn together powerfully in a way that neither seems to understand and certainly neither feels comfortable with. The characterizations are excellent.