Date: 03/31/2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Having Spock safeword to the thought of Jim's behaving like Khan is an interesting and clever idea.
It's horrible BDSM etiquette for Jim to do that mini-scene in front of McCoy and Uhura, though -- that's involving the two of them in Kirk's and Spock's play without their consent, and that is unethical. (I know it's just a story, not a guide, but I expect better of a Starfleet captain than to do something that unethical.)
Hello, yes, thank you for the review!
And I suppose the idea I was trying to convey was the fact that yes, it was inappropriate and it did make McCoy and Uhura uncomfortable, but because of Khan's blood making Jim more eratic, he thought it would be a greater display of power. So, yeah, if I was writing a normal BDSM fic that didn't have a power display element (like I would imagine mirror!spirk probably doing something like that, but they are unethical for the most part) then no that wouldn't have happened. Thank you!