Date: 04/15/2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've always wanted to know how Kirk felt about what he did to Spock and the actions his T'hy'la decided because of what he did. I like that Spock is so forgiving, though I kinda want to bitch-slap Jim for doing such a thing. Sorry, if it doesn't make sense. Bye.
Date: 02/20/2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love poetry that rhymes. Your poem has such meaning. Jim betrays Spock, leaving Spock emotionally hurt. He decides to leave and pursue Kolinahr. He really believes that getting rid of his own emotions it'll make him whole again, and he won't need Jim...But, Spock is constantly distracted by the past. You can't erase five years, and with that Jim as well. He can't help but think of him, his voice calling him, begging him certainly to forgive him...Your poem reflects Spock's feelings, what he is thinking.
Thanks for sharing this, and please do write more poems when you can.