Date: 02/15/2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
ahhh this was very sweet! I wish you had expanded on that first part though. It would be interesting to see what and how Jim deals with stuff, but I guess it would be another story entirely ;)
I really enjoyed this one! but I think there's something wrong with the formatting, hmm.
Thank you! I clearly should work with this more to turn it to one, whole story instead of two parts. I appreciate your comment very much, thanks!
Date: 02/13/2014 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love stories where Spock is the one who makes the first move. I also liked that he second guessed himself. This was really sweet! Thank you for sharing it.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting, glad I was able to make you happy :)
Date: 02/10/2014 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
the beginning seemed totally disconnected to the rest of the story unless you are expanding the story?? Good story though!
Author's Response: I see your point. I tried to establish a reason for why Jim was so tired and upset, and why Spock then saw it fit to cheer him up with a very special gift. Thank you for the criticism, I will definitely learn from it!