Date: 02/03/2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like this very much! A terran media frenzy resulting from the “discovery” of pon farr is a great idea, and very believable. Kirk’s reaction and resigning his commission seem perfectly in character; I love that virtually the entire Enterprise crew rallies around Spock as well. The dialogue when he and Jim get together is beautiful: they make a conscious decision without agonizing over it. Their intimacy seems natural and inevitable, not to mention satisfying because it also solves Spock’s problem of not having a partner for his own eventual pon farr. Very nicely done.
Date: 01/20/2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved how you included the changing culture in this as people found out about the Vulcna's Pon Farr. love how you write Spock and Kirk! Thanks for sharing with us readers~
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed.