Date: 01/21/2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Significant Hours Of Our Day
Very, very nice.
What a name.... I hope Seturek must never underwrite with the full name... LoL....
Exactly - it is mad, but that is supposedly the myth : Vulcan names are tough to pronounce and lengthy (!) - they'd have no issues as they have such awesome memories and capacity for knowledge/calculating/deducing. XXXX
Date: 01/20/2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 3: A Moment To Ourselves
Awww, I love this so much. Very sweet and adorable. :)
THANK YOU - I have added a conclusionary chapter now as well. Hope you enjoy that, too!! Many, Many Thanks for your kindness! xx
Date: 01/19/2014 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 2: Where Will We Go?
Aww, this was absolutely lovely. :)
Thank you - I'm always afraid that my stories, or specific furthering chapters (either/or!) are a bit of something and NOTHING!! THANK YOU for being Kind!!
Date: 01/17/2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow!! This is so intriguing! The idea and concept are so interesting. I would encourage you to make this into a longer and more in depth story. I have so many questions about the accident and Jim and Spock. And the idea of a baby! Why aren't they in a real relationship before this? What is going on behind the scenes?
Seriously-expand this!! Please!!
I will try, if I get enough of something to go on... Thank you for being so kind!
Date: 01/17/2014 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is really a sweet story despite the fact that Jim at this point can no longer be the Captain that he once was and still wishes that he could be. I would love to see more to the story and see just how he continues to recuperate and how life will be for them once Spock, and he have a child. I was wondering if you may have thought that even though it would be an artificial womb do you think it would be possible to have them to also have a child of their own, just a thought, but yes would love to see more to the story if you have more ideas in a direction to take it and I do so love your stories and hope that you will continue to write for a long time.
Well, yes, I would have it that Spock kept the womb for those reasons; maybe, he gets pregnant accidentally - though that would mean he'd have ovaries! I haven't definitely got an idea to continue this, but if I can, if part of a conversation occurs to me, or some such part of the story, I will try and continue it. No absolute promises though.