Date: 09/11/2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Was there a prequel to this story? I feel like the story is missing an entire chapter where we get to see what Kirk actually went through rather than just a few comments he makes barely mentioning it. Wld love to see you add that chapter if only as a flashback. or mind meld.
Date: 01/06/2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, my. Quite intereresting. Am I to assume that Spock will take his revenge?
Author's Response: Thank you for the review and the comment, I'm honored that a wonderful writer like you took the time to read my piece :) I wouldn't think Spock is after a revenge. If he is, he'll be brutally efficient about it. Jim should really keep his Vulcan happy for now...