Date: 08/28/2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Charming! I love the total vulcanness of Spock's remarks and the way Jim just accepts them. "Do you wish us to become more intimate?" I mean, this seems to be the least romantic way to ask that question, but Jim understands Spock's peculiar way of expressing himself so well that he goes along with it and actually the scene becomes very romantic.
Date: 01/02/2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this! The story arc over the span of a year is very effective and the development of their relationship feels natural and real, especially since it remains gradual even after they have crossed that line. Great dialogue throughout. Thanks, and happy new year!