Date: 10/08/2014 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh come ON Bones, join the party!
And for chrissake Jim, stop talking football in the middle of a hot scene. You are distracting my lady boner.
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Date: 12/23/2013 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the line 'Vulcans don't play football', and McCoy's final line. The venacular of their banter (!) is almost always very in character. Maybe, you're taking liberties just an eensy bit with our imagination, as a Christmas gift! Don't know about McCoy witnessing quite SO much! EEk! Yet, I kept reading, as ity's mostly tongue in cheek (and elsewhere!?!) - Though, maybe it wasn't the most Holy of choices for someone who tries to be a good Christian woman! Some of the lines were just so funny, and the fun, just before McCoy arrived (not in any way other than the actual sense!)... Well, I'm a geek - we don't get to have that much fun, only ever read about it!!
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Yeah, I mean this is a pretty farce-like story, I am asking the reader to suspend disbelief here, I mean really who in their right mind is gonna have sex right out in the open with a fellow crewman unwittingly having to witness it. I don't know, maybe some folks might? but yeah it's pushing it! (Bones probably will require some therapy when they get back) But it was done for humor purposes. But thanks I'm glad you liked it anyway!
Date: 12/23/2013 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thankyou for a much needed laugh!
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Date: 12/23/2013 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG...I have never laughed so hard in my life. This was fricken hilarious. Excellent work. Poor Bones...Gotta love Don Ho.
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I love Don Ho! I'm glad you are a fan of him, too!