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Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2013 2:47 PM Title: Na'shaya

refresher courses indeed. LOL. I do love the explanation you came up with for the ta'al, and of course Spock's way of explaining it. Nicely done. :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I take full credit for the lesson, but the actual explanation is not mine. Happy you enjoyed it, considering how much I bitched about writing this piece. LOL.

Reviewer: vixis Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2013 8:17 PM Title: Na'shaya

I'd fan myself with my hands but...dear gawd....*grinning*

Reviewer: vixis Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2013 8:17 PM Title: Na'shaya

I'd fan myself with my hands but...dear gawd....*grinning*



Author's Response:

LOL. Happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2013 6:40 AM Title: Na'shaya

This was absolutely wonderful to read.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: WeirdLittleStories Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2013 3:06 AM Title: Na'shaya

Hee!  What an adorable idea for a story!  I can well believe that this pedigogical method might motivate Jim properly. :-)


McCoy and Sarek?  Wow.  *mind boggles*

One correction:  "Prone" means lying face DOWN; the word for lying face UP is "supine."  So when you say, The sensual side of his Vulcan was displayed while Spock slowly clambered onto their bunk, hovering on hands and knees over top of Jim’s prone body, that should actually be Jim's SUPINE body, since you make it clear later on that they're face to face.

Thanks for the story!

 



Author's Response:

Happy you liked it! And yeah, I've got a serious think for Sarek/McCoy.


And thanks for the correction! I completely missed that on my review of it. LOL. I'll fix it immediately.

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2013 2:23 AM Title: Na'shaya

OMG! Most ingenious, clever, sexy and incredibly HOT!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Happy you enjoyed it. :)

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