Reviews For Gate of Kings
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Reviewer: angelocustode Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2014 3:15 AM Title: Gate of Kings

Hot and intense, I love your use of language, uncommonly suggestive.



Author's Response:

I don't even know what that means, but I like it. Thanks for the read!!!

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2013 3:05 AM Title: Gate of Kings

Cerebral sex, indeed! This is well-written, thoroughly hot loving sub specie aeternitatis.

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2013 10:15 AM Title: Gate of Kings

Oh, wonderfully hot!  And I'm not sure how you define 'bad' but I can't see this as a bad habit!

 

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2013 7:32 AM Title: Gate of Kings

Simply, a roller coaster ride of hotness. The repeating of the word 'Jim!!' in your story, elicits such erotic thoughts. Your words are poetic. Well done.

Reviewer: ForgottenOne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2013 10:17 PM Title: Gate of Kings

Damn!  Hot hot hawt!  I like your descriptions, and the repetitive use of Jim's name as an intro to the paragraph.  And the bad habit neither is willing to break is my bad habit too, of sitting here reading about them when I really should be cleaning the house.  You have a wonderful voice.  I'd like to see more, please!

Reviewer: Vulcan Lover Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2013 7:57 PM Title: Gate of Kings

Beyond awesome, VERY HOT and Loving, too!

Reviewer: StarLight10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2013 4:57 PM Title: Gate of Kings

OMG. That was awesome. 

Amazing chapter, I loved it.

Xoxo. 

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2013 4:17 PM Title: Gate of Kings

Well, that certainly got my attention on a rainy, cold Sunday morning!

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