Reviews For Emeritus Years
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Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2013 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice... Angsty and sweet. Tos and aos... I like what khans blood did to Jim!

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2013 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was so powerful, intense and so beautiful.

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

A wonderful little story. I like it very much. Thank you for sharing. :-)

Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awww - very nice, very sweet.  I'll admit to the tiniest of confusion at the beginning about which Spock was sitting there, but we'll just call that reader error.  I did find a tiny typo in case you want to fix it: 'an unforgivable violated.' I'm assuming you intended 'violation.'  

I must say I really love your descriptive writing - you make great word choices but more than that you just put them together so creatively such as 'a trembling sense of calm'.  Thank you so much for posting this, I truly enjoyed it.

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