Date: 01/15/2014 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
In the middle of the story, when we realize that Spock had punched Jim, my brain sputtered to a screeching halt while it tried to figure out what the hell was going on. Then all of the pieces slid together, I understood, and the reading part of the brain picked up where it left off. But I gotta tell you, I think there are pieces of brain gears scattered across my living room. I'll pick them up after I stop grinning like an idiot.
Date: 11/20/2013 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my, this is fabulous. Your descriptions of torture were almost too much to bear except, in this medium, you can't turn your eyes away. You're a marvelous writer and I'm going on to read your other stuff now. Thank you.