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Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2013 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Poetic and heartfelt. I think a poem is, indeed, the only way to show this profound degree of longing.



Author's Response:

THANK YOU. I'm so glad you 'got' that feel from it..!

Reviewer: plaktow Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is an interesting piece of free-verse poetry.To me it seems a bit unfinished, which is probably due to your style of not using full stops or paragraphs. It's just a style thing anyway, so not important :) The ending was very nice and surprising, and leaves the reader hoping that one day the door will open...



Author's Response:

Thanks. I suppose I didn't bother with punctuation for 2 reasons; I get it wrong (!) and because it's meant to make a person think (the poem!) - Thanks for the compliments!

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